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You said the drops of Jupiter
Hidden in my eyes
Made me beautiful.

Liar.
I was never beautiful.

You said I lit up the night like
A galactic revolution and
Made the moon seem dull

Liar.
Wall flowers don’t shine.

You said I was Orion’s Belt,
Enveloping the vast
Expanses of your mind

Liar.
I can barely hold myself together.

You said I was too good for this world,
And promised there was
More to it all.

Liar.
We both know this is
All I’ll ever be.

Funny how someone you call
Star-bound can
Feel so lost
Among the stars.
So many space puns
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angelenroute Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Professional Writer
I agree that self-deprecatory is not good, BUT you've touched upon a very, well, universal emotion here.  We're all the center of someone's world, but often just feel like dirt anyway.  Thank you for taking me on this journey (did you plan it?).

; )
Sean
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TheGreenDragoon Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
This is quite good! A little too self deprecatory, but NOT bad. I look forward to more!
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SerenadeTheAsylum Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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TackyCatYo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Ahem.* Favorited.
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SerenadeTheAsylum Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
why thank you
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AsterGirl Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
I absolutely love this, especially the ending. Keep up the great work.Panda Bunny Neko Misc Emoji-07 (Applause) [V1] 
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SerenadeTheAsylum Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youu continue being an awesome individual
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